In conclusion the character Benjamin in George Orwell’s animal farm has showed a dramatic change in the book when he is faced with losing his great friend boxer. The author then makes benjamin seem like he doesn’t care about anyone or anything to then make this part in the novel a shock to the readers to make the book very interesting. This also shows how much of a good friendship bond boxer and benjamin had and how that affected benjamins behaviour. All this shows that benjamin and people in the real can change depending on what challenges they’re faced with and how they can change and react to them in different ways.
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Add Yours →This is a good example of a conclusion Ewan, well done. Unfortunately the points you are basing you arguments on are not very clear. You have a really strong grasp of the structure, now it’s just about making your points more defined.